Blog entry #15 April 5, 2010

After completing the first peer review project I learned that I gave good transitions between each section.  I felt that after having a student read my paper that the student was able to edit my paper in some way that I couldn’t do with my own paper.  I learned that with my own paper that I need to include one source that I forgot to include and to reword a couple of sentences.  I learned that people write differently than me.  Since my paper is based on a personal experience my writing style was different then my partners writing.  I learned that once you edit someone elses paper you can see if you messed up in your own paper.  I kind of liked the project but I didn’t want to be to hard on my partner.  I am a nice person and I didn’t want to ruin his paper.  I also learned that you need to have an open mind on what your partners paper is about.  I know with my partner that I am not for what he is trying to accomplish so I really had to try to have an open mind.  I also learned in my paper that I gave a lot of good information and that I just need to fix a few things.

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